Hot (for NaPoWriMo)
1.
Ice smoke kisses cool
the passion of a summer
still sweating for him
2.
My bare breath and I
listless longing for a life
on dry summer days
posted by scribe at 8:03 PM
Thursday, April 01, 2010
Ice smoke kisses cool
the passion of a summer
still sweating for him
2.
My bare breath and I
listless longing for a life
on dry summer days
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2 Comments:
I like the way you evoke the sense of heat with an economic approach to words and images. Thank you for sharing this poem.
this is smooth. very smooth.
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