Thursday, April 01, 2010

Hot (for NaPoWriMo)

1.
Ice smoke kisses cool
the passion of a summer
still sweating for him

2.
My bare breath and I
listless longing for a life
on dry summer days

2 Comments:

OpenID olyphant said...

I like the way you evoke the sense of heat with an economic approach to words and images. Thank you for sharing this poem.

5:30 AM  
Anonymous Alex said...

this is smooth. very smooth.

10:13 AM  

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